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Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-06-26 10:08 PM

You are as the apple upon the tree

I am as Eve

You tempt me with desires

I tremble . . .

to reach -

to touch -

to taste -

to know.

S.A.T.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2004-06-26 10:11 PM

Exceptional feel to this within so few but
perfectly placed words...

Well done Susan..

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-06-26 10:14 PM

Thank you Barry, very much.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-06-26 11:02 PM

But a simple plea, nonetheless....

well done, Susan.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2004-06-26 11:54 PM

This is a very yearning and seductive write. I can almost feel the r-e-a-c-h.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2004-06-26 11:56 PM

Oh, I really liked this Susan.... Reminds me of the song,

"Lemon tree very pretty, and the lemon flower is sweet,
but the fruit of the poor lemon is impossible to eat" Ha!!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2004-06-26 11:59 PM

Sunshine -- Thank you kindly.

Kethry -- yes, you stated the essence of the poem well. Thanks for your reply.

BluesSerenade, you made me smile -- thanks.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2004-06-27 02:57 AM

Susan, very, very nicely done! ......jo

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

8 posted 2004-06-27 12:07 PM

Thanks jo, big hug.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

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