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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-06-26 07:14 PM

a summer storm
blows the face off the ocean,

a sycamore of sparrows
takes its picture
in the waiting pond,

over the bridge of shadows
starlite fools the concrete
with a ring of diamonds,

maybe tomorrow the sun
will shine the morning
through the hollow of my eyes.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-27-2004 05:42 PM).]

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-06-26 07:32 PM

"maybe tomorrow
the sun will shine
the morning through my eyes."

I'm sure it will, Inked one -- you could never stay in shadow too long. Lovely writing, though.

...jo

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-06-26 08:09 PM

Much enjoyed. I like your use of words.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2004-06-26 08:12 PM

~ May the morning sun forever shine blessings upon your poetic soul!

EA

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2004-06-26 08:38 PM

You're in rare *inkedgoddess* form here, girlie.

Beautiful, beautiful you~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2004-06-27 08:16 PM

Hard to choose a favorite line...or a favorite view of your talents Inkedone.
Applause.
TD

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

6 posted 2004-06-27 08:29 PM

this really sets a mood; nicely done.
miscellanea

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

7 posted 2004-06-27 09:25 PM

Beautiful words,deep messege,perfect title
enjoyed
-------ice
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Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2004-06-27 09:36 PM

"maybe tomorrow the sun
will shine the morning
through the hollow of my eyes."

Beautiful Michele...well done.
Hugs~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-06-28 03:04 AM

it will...it always does

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

10 posted 2004-06-28 05:18 PM

hollow smiles,
with lonely eyes,
looking off in the distance,
thinking of fun times,
on hot sheets,
in the state of the garden

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

11 posted 2004-06-29 07:09 AM

A very visual poem...well done
_______ice
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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

12 posted 2004-06-29 07:50 AM

thanks guys for looking in

bboy....youre the cat's meow

kayjay
Member Elite

since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

13 posted 2004-06-29 09:09 AM

I found this like the child's game of crack the whip; the zinger is at the end. Well done! KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

14 posted 2004-06-29 09:29 AM

Jo stole my favorite lines.

*pout*

Wonderful writing as usual.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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