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SimplyGold
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0 posted 2004-06-26 06:36 PM


Today there is light
  warm to the bone working its way deep
to the space that is beyond matter

Its radiance
cannot be explained
it just is

Today there is light
  the curve of your smile working its way deep
to a place that is beyond the heart

Its radiance
cannot be explained
it just is

Today there is sunshine
  giving of energy mixing with the rich soil
of the planets body

Its radiance
we try to explain
but it just is

You are the experience
  there is nothing to explain


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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2004-06-26 08:05 PM


SG, indeed today there is light in your poetic thoughts. Very creative and expressive writing!

Smiling here!
EA

Susan
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2 posted 2004-06-26 08:07 PM


Oooooooooh, I liiiike this!  Yes indeed.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

iliana
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3 posted 2004-06-26 08:12 PM


I so much enjoyed this, SimplyGold.  It was very uplifting.   ........jo
SimplyGold
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4 posted 2004-06-27 12:15 PM


Thank you EA. As they sang in the show Hair, "Let the Sunshine in"


SimplyGold
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5 posted 2004-06-27 12:16 PM


Susan, thank you for taking the time to read my work, especially for the encouraging words.

SG

SimplyGold
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6 posted 2004-06-27 12:20 PM


iliana,

I have been reading your work and I enjoy it very much thus, making your comments even sweeter.

SG

Ericc
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7 posted 2004-06-27 12:42 PM


Great write...perhaps my favorite of yours...and there are many!

Eric

passing shadows
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8 posted 2004-06-27 12:44 PM


wow! love those last lines!
ThisDiamond
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9 posted 2004-06-27 11:35 PM


Such elegance.
TD

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10 posted 2004-06-28 01:40 PM


AG, yes, sometimes things are.....
they just are....
This is a good poem.
Hugs,
Ethel

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