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First Flight
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First Flight |
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Charles Junior Member
since 2002-10-01
Posts 12Hoechenschwand, Germany |
First Flight Remember what our ten-year-old love felt like that heat-laden afternoon when we held hands a first time and stopped along the pond to watch a red-wing in the rushes observing us from its reedy perch swaying, as if prying that tender moment into our deep hearts for a lifetime-- or was it only in mine? from: Along the Way |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Beautiful. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Much enjoyed the tender swaying. Welcome to the blue pages, Charles~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Charles..I remember something like this. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Enjoyed this very much, Charles. It evoked images and feelings. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I hope this poem signals a rebirth. We need poets like you, with the insight to create a worthwhile poem and the maturity to make it be all it can be. Post again....soon. Meanwhile I'm bookmarking your site. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Terrific write, my friend... jwesley |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
precious Welcome Back |
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