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Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

0 posted 2004-06-26 04:15 PM

I am
consuming
numerous
memories

yet
none can imagine
how parched I
remain

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-06-26 04:20 PM

EXCELLENT!!!!!!

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-06-26 05:26 PM

Brevity is your companion, Sudhir.
I can only ditto Enchantress!

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

3 posted 2004-06-26 06:32 PM

Very good. I like this one.

I didn't have to read half a page to experience a feeling.

Well done. More should be so brief.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2004-06-26 07:07 PM

yes the brevity, let's hear it for brevity and brilliance all on the same page!!!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-06-26 07:38 PM

Oh, Sudhir, this says so much! Know the feeeling.

........jo

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2004-06-26 08:28 PM

That's right, no one can possibly imagine,
and yet, these words of yours run deep.

So very nicely done, Sudhir~

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2004-06-28 10:53 AM

yet.... enjoyed this much

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-06-28 12:31 PM

how short, how powerful!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2004-06-28 02:59 PM

SudhirMyFriend~

Thirteen words leave a huge impact~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

10 posted 2004-06-28 04:11 PM

i'm impressed!

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

11 posted 2004-06-28 11:45 PM

A poem is a chosen memory.....I choose this one.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

12 posted 2004-06-29 02:07 PM

Oh, my... brevity this beautiful leaves me envious. *S* Excellent work!!

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

13 posted 2004-07-13 08:01 AM

quite honoured, I am

regards
sudhir

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