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Sudhir Iyer
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Mumbai, India : now in Belgium


0 posted 06-26-2004 04:15 PM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

I am
consuming
numerous
memories

yet
none can imagine
how parched I
remain
© Copyright 2004 Sudhir Iyer - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


1 posted 06-26-2004 04:20 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

EXCELLENT!!!!!!

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


2 posted 06-26-2004 05:26 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


Brevity is your companion, Sudhir.  
I can only ditto Enchantress!
RobertB
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3 posted 06-26-2004 06:32 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

Very good. I like this one.

I didn't have to read half a page to experience a feeling.

Well done. More should be so brief.
inkedgoddess
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4 posted 06-26-2004 07:07 PM       View Profile for inkedgoddess   Email inkedgoddess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inkedgoddess

yes the brevity, let's hear it for brevity and brilliance all on the same page!!!
iliana
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5 posted 06-26-2004 07:38 PM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

Oh, Sudhir, this says so much!  Know the feeeling.   ........jo
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside


6 posted 06-26-2004 08:28 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

That's right, no one can possibly imagine,
and yet, these words of yours run deep.

So very nicely done, Sudhir~
vandana
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7 posted 06-28-2004 10:53 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

yet.... enjoyed this much
passing shadows
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displaced


8 posted 06-28-2004 12:31 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

how short, how powerful!
Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores


9 posted 06-28-2004 02:59 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

SudhirMyFriend~

Thirteen words leave a huge impact~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

kaile
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10 posted 06-28-2004 04:11 PM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaile

i'm impressed!
Ratleader
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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass


11 posted 06-28-2004 11:45 PM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

A poem is a chosen memory.....I choose this one.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

suthern
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on the threshold of a dream


12 posted 06-29-2004 02:07 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Oh, my... brevity this beautiful leaves me envious. *S* Excellent work!!
Sudhir Iyer
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13 posted 07-13-2004 08:01 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

quite honoured, I am

regards
sudhir
 
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