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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2004-06-26 01:59 PM



Didn’t you hear me?
I cried for you
and oceans bled......

This ache isn’t new to me
simply refreshed
when you hold me in your eyes
touch me with your voice
destroy me, in your absence

I’ve always loved you....
....I always will....


And when you close your eyes tonight
.....listen.....


~SEA~



© Copyright 2004 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-06-26 02:08 PM


SEA
Listen and hear the Sea.

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2004-06-26 02:15 PM


OhSweetSEA~
How beautifully melancholic is this piece ... VERY~
Love you gal~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-06-26 02:53 PM


Beautiful Susan....just beautiful!!
Hugs~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2004-06-26 03:13 PM


Didn’t you hear me?
I cried for you
and oceans bled......

~*~

You know how pleased I am
with this one...

Larry C
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5 posted 2004-06-26 03:16 PM


Perfect! Just perfect. Bunny hugs for you.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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6 posted 2004-06-28 08:22 AM


Didn’t you hear me?
I cried for you
and oceans bled......
============================
destroy me, in your absence
===========================


to quote you....


GOOD GRIEF.  
(ykikyk)


Susan Caldwell
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7 posted 2004-06-28 10:06 AM


"This ache isn’t new to me
simply refreshed"

Wonderful!


"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

miscellanea
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OH
8 posted 2004-06-28 10:09 AM


smiling at you--I'm wordless
                  miscellanea

iliana
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9 posted 2004-06-28 10:52 AM


SEA, this pulls on my heart strings, and I listen.....what I hear is so much longing and love.     .....jo
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10 posted 2004-06-28 12:28 PM


ah sigh
to love someone so much

vandana
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11 posted 2004-06-28 09:26 PM


enjoyed
jwesley
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12 posted 2004-06-28 09:53 PM


have missed your beautiful words SEA... a pleasure to read them again...

jwesley

ctowen
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13 posted 2004-06-28 10:04 PM


The Sea holds true three things ...

            Beauty,
              Power, and
                  Life!!

                             *S

Susan
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14 posted 2004-06-28 11:34 PM


Excellent in its expression of frustration and ache.  It hurts.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

PKreturns
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15 posted 2004-06-29 08:02 AM


How did I not see this?
Amazing SEA....I cried for you and the oceans bled....wow.

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state of mind
16 posted 2004-06-29 10:03 AM


i found a shell
put it to my ear
and heard your voice
upon the echo of the winds

enjoyed
bernie

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Bernie Slicker

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Realms of Light
17 posted 2004-06-29 10:17 AM


If he were to really "listen", there would be tears in HIS eyes...


EA

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18 posted 2004-06-29 10:19 AM


beautiful indeed

Victims....aren't we all.

Toerag
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Ala bam a
19 posted 2004-06-29 10:43 AM


I'll do just this.....I'm hard of hearing, and, if my eyes are closed...I'll try to feel your words with braille...okay?...I'll "listen" for ya tonight....nice write gal...
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