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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2004-06-26 09:14 AM


You lied about it all,
Set me up for a fall.
Just for you and him to laugh,
You don't even know the half.
You think you hurt me,
But you didn't see.
In your twisted game,
You were a pawn for me the same.
I knew about the two of you all along,
That's why I'm not crying your song.
Dirty is how you treated it,
Anger burns on my face you spit.
Tried to play me for a laughing fool,
Blew up and you fell right off that stool.
You did it just to get a laugh from me,
It didn't work and now you'll see.
You can try to mess with my head,
All the way till nothing more is said.
But in the end what you'll find,
Is that since I knew I screwed with your mind.
Eight months behing my back,
Don't expect me to give you slack.
Because all you are...
Is a lying, cheating,no good piece of trash.

The fear I see when I look in your eyes makes you believe I'm one of a kind

© Copyright 2004 Kyle - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-06-26 09:19 AM


Well I guess you told her! LOL...
Feels better when you write it out doesn't it?
Great vent here Kyle.
Hugs~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
2 posted 2004-06-26 09:23 AM


oh no..half of what she told me last night was a lie too she just wanted to piss me off...her boyfriend is supposed to bring her up here to watch him kick my butt....i say..bring it i got enough psychos with me if i need em

The fear I see when I look in your eyes makes you believe I'm one of a kind

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2004-06-26 09:28 AM


Oh, Hot Flakes, I feel for you. Now I understand why you said in your reply to my poem that you had needed that laugh.

Huge, comforting hug ~ and a tickle to give you another laugh! Yes, I can see how you need a laugh or two right about now.

EA
P.S. Methinks she be the one who is the "fool"!

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
4 posted 2004-06-26 09:32 AM


eh....shes gone in the head so itll be ok...they wanna come up here and get rowdy then i guess ill just hafta show em that tennessee and iowa dont breed scrappers like missouri does but thank you both

The fear I see when I look in your eyes makes you believe I'm one of a kind

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2004-06-26 01:17 PM


it sounds like she's not worth the time or these words you've written

and she's definitely not worth the showdown

move on to better things, you are a better man

Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08
Posts 956

6 posted 2004-06-26 01:38 PM


I just want you to know that you are highly respected here.

if you don't mind can I say, don't stoop to their level

If your poetry reveals who you really are, and I'm thinkin it does, you have class


iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
7 posted 2004-06-26 01:59 PM


Wwwhooa -- angry poem -- very potent and well written.  
Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
8 posted 2004-06-28 09:19 AM


Kid? Ma loves ya...and maybe I'm not a psycho but I sure can kick butt when I have to.
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