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in reluctant nods

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Sudhir Iyer
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0 posted 06-25-2004 05:12 PM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

special
thoughts of you
float
down

effortlessly
like a
feather

as softly as
the light summer breeze
that licks
bitter-sweet
tears

symphony of
simple lines
lyrically wish you
the best in
this wide
world

as effortlessly as
leaves
dropping off
trees
these words float
from my
winter-shrivelled
lips

while
your dawn
breaks through
the darkness
of my
night

I smile
acceptingly
in reluctant
nods

© Copyright 2004 Sudhir Iyer - All Rights Reserved
suthern
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on the threshold of a dream


1 posted 06-25-2004 05:18 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

This is one of your best, my friend... I loved every line!!!
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


2 posted 06-25-2004 05:57 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Excellent!!  Love this Sudhir!
And...I'm keeping it!
Hugs~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

passing shadows
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displaced


3 posted 06-26-2004 04:39 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

very soft and warm
Sudhir Iyer
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4 posted 06-26-2004 03:20 PM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Thanks so very much

Regards
sudhir
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5 posted 06-29-2004 12:19 AM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

Four days ago, a feather floated down to me out of a clear blue sky....and paused in front of me as if waiting for me to take it out of the air....which I did....and yes, I had many, many thoughts spring from that, or continue in new paths because of it.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
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jwesley
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Texas . . .


6 posted 06-29-2004 12:22 AM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

This, in my humble opinion, is the best I've seen of yours, my friend, and I have seen most of them I think... very, very well written (as are all yours - guess I'm partial to this one).

jwesley
Sudhir Iyer
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7 posted 07-13-2004 08:02 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

thanks muchly Ed and jwesley

regards
sudhir
 
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