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Ku'uipo
Junior Member
since 2003-09-25
Posts 42


0 posted 2004-06-25 04:21 PM



give me strength to fight my fate
let my timid spirit sing
sprout me wings and let me fly
let my silent spirit ring

free me from the fear i hold
let my feeble spirit soar
unblind my eyes and let me see
let my wistful spirit roar

give me hope and bring faith near
do not let my spirit cry
i want to find my way back home
do not let my spirit die

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iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2004-06-25 06:17 PM


What an important prayer you have so gently whispered here.  I hope it is granted.  
Foxyoasis
Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
2 posted 2004-06-25 06:26 PM


nice write
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
3 posted 2004-06-25 07:50 PM


In the blind, all other senses are magnified...follow your heart and you will find the right path.
Really liked this one.
TD

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
4 posted 2004-06-25 09:06 PM


Emotional write, filled with a sorrowful longing.  Enjoyed the read.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2004-06-26 04:33 AM


how I understand this!
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