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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2004-06-25 10:48 AM



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I had a restless night last night,
For I tossed and twisted and turned.
I could not drift into a peaceful sleep,
As the mid-of-nite-oil burned.

All the trials of my loved ones,
And those of mine as well,
Kept reeling through my mind,
In a night of living hell.

At 3 AM, my flashing clock,
Caught my bleary eyes.
I sat bolt up and saw a Light,
Which glowed and grew in size.

While bathed in glorious rays,
A calm came over me.
I knew my worrying was in vain,
For what will be, will be.

I closed my eyes and fell asleep,
In to a sweet repose.
I awoke this morn, with joy in my heart,
For clutched in my hand, was a rose!
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© Copyright 2004 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2004-06-25 10:51 AM


"While bathed in those glorious rays,
A calm came over me.
I knew my worrying was in vain,
For what will be, will be."

I recently had this happen to me too...but I was on an airplane!
enjoyed this

Toerag
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2 posted 2004-06-25 11:17 AM


What a sweet story gal.....(no, I'm not going write something naughty or silly, just that it's a great write)......................................................................................................................................................well, I could say instead of a rose in your hand that....oh, never mind....sweet write gal...ya done good!
Enchantress
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3 posted 2004-06-25 11:20 AM


Beautiful, uplifting, inspiring write Linda..
So very much enjoyed.
Hugs~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

garysgirl
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4 posted 2004-06-25 11:20 AM


Oh Linda, this one actually gave me chills.
I've felt this before many times. That kind
of peace and calm is what we all need.
Hugs to you, my friend........
and send me some peace and light.....
Ethel

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5 posted 2004-06-25 11:28 AM


Linda, really, really wonderful rose of a poem.  You know how much I like it, without a doubt!  your lily lady sends hugs
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6 posted 2004-06-26 07:10 PM


EA,
Wonderful write. Sleep well for there are many guardian angels out there looking over you.

SG

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2004-06-26 07:54 PM


SEA ~

Experiences such as ours have a profound impact on our lives!

Love & Light,
EA

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8 posted 2004-06-26 07:56 PM


Toe ~

Oh my! Even this reply had your signature Toe Twist at the conclusion! Keeps life interesting!

Kiss on the cheek,
EA

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9 posted 2004-06-26 07:57 PM


Nancy ~

I enjoy giving your wings a little added lift!

Love & Light,
Linda

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10 posted 2004-06-26 07:58 PM


garysgirl ~

My darlin' l'il Ethel Mae, I'm sending you a whole cloud load of peace & Light!!!


Linda Lou

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11 posted 2004-06-26 07:59 PM


iliana ~

I graciously accept your lauds, Lily Lady!

Big Huggums,
EA

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12 posted 2004-06-26 08:00 PM


SG ~

Thank you! ~ and may a host of Guardian Angels watch over you whilst you sleep each nite!

Peaceful slumbering!
EA

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13 posted 2004-06-26 10:15 PM


And may there be many more roses clutched
within your hand.  Such a positive and
inspiring write.  Thanx Linda.

Kethry
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14 posted 2004-06-26 10:57 PM


Well written and shows the struggle. I don't know that I'd want to wake up with a rose in my hand though because in sleep everything of mine is clenched so I know I'd wake up with thorns gouging my skin. However it did add a fragrance to the poem.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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15 posted 2004-06-26 11:07 PM


While bathed in glorious rays,
A calm came over me.
I knew my worrying was in vain,
For what will be, will be.

I closed my eyes and fell asleep,
In to a sweet repose.
I awoke this morn, with joy in my heart,
For clutched in my hand, was a rose!

~*~

Sometimes we have to experience
the thorn of the touch
before we can grasp the rose
in full...

I know these dreams...

I'm glad you do, too...

Earth Angel
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16 posted 2004-06-27 05:36 AM


Magnus ~

Thank you, gallant Barry! Roses make the world so much sweeter!

Big morning hug,
Linda

Earth Angel
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17 posted 2004-06-27 05:40 AM


Kethry ~

Well helloooo there, Dear Keth!

I hear ya! lol ~ But this was a rose without thorns! If it had been a thorny one, there would have been blood dripping from my hand and there would have been a frozen scream on my face! That would have put a whole different spin on my night's experience! lol

Good to hear from you!

EA

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18 posted 2004-06-27 05:41 AM


Sunshine ~

...I knew that you would know...

Kindred hugs,
Linda

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