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Ku'uipo
Junior Member

since 2003-09-25

Posts 42

0 posted 2004-06-24 05:56 PM

Light flickers strangely soft
Illumination lost in violet eyes
Nimble fluxes sweetly speak
Transluscent glow a story lies

Wistful warmth I yearn to touch
Exposing extrinsic inherent ways
Forbidden felicity churns beneath
Unleashing illusion, illicit gaze

Bring forth the inquisitive
And incarcerate the glare
Infiltrate and ascend the fiery lair

© Copyright 2004 Ku'uipo - All Rights Reserved

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-06-24 07:04 PM

Enjoyed this very much!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2004-06-25 08:08 PM

Your form is familiar...a poet I have missed here. This write seemed familiar also.
I picture a soul leaving the grips of flames...rebirth.
TD

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-06-25 09:00 PM

Hmmm, I like this. Thought invoking.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-06-26 04:34 AM

your vocabulary is remarkable...nice write

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2004-06-26 08:52 AM

Hi, there! Your fascinating use of language was very interesting ~ and captivating!

EA

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