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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2004-06-24 10:41 AM

Everyday,
Sunshine through my eyes,
Love wash away my tears,
Every page I turn
Your love burns,
My soul,
Every way,
Every page I turn,
Into a memory of yesterday's gone,
Every page
of every song,
That were written,
In this book,
The look of love,
Every night,
When I pray
Try to love again,
But I can't fail,
I want you,
to come back,
In life,
Again,
To fill your love
In my heart again.....
Every page.....
Let ray of light,
Morning dew,
Every page turning
Into A impossible love,
Every page....
Burning every page....
Of loved fades away....
Every page......

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2004-06-24 03:49 PM

This is a very beautiful poem. 2 thumbs up.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

2 posted 2004-06-24 03:59 PM

So poignant...beautifuly done.

Eric

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2004-06-24 04:05 PM

I can feel the yearning and the burning in your heart.

May the coming pages be written with the sweetness of returned love.

EA

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-06-24 04:12 PM

Very nice Vandana...such a sense of longing to this piece.
Hugs~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

5 posted 2004-06-24 04:41 PM

Very sweet words, Vandana.

Enjoyed reading!

~tier

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

6 posted 2004-06-24 06:15 PM

Emotional, comes through very strong.

sg

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2004-06-25 12:36 PM

Like Earth Angel, I feel the burning and longing, too.

.....jo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-06-25 04:59 AM

absolutely passionate!

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

9 posted 2004-06-25 05:39 AM

A fine poem....very intense..love that transcends life...very strong love here..thank you..

Goldenrose.

''Death where is thy sting? Love where is thy glory?'' William Shakespeare.

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

10 posted 2004-06-25 05:59 AM

every page...

miscellanea

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

11 posted 2004-06-25 07:38 AM

quite good...

and much enjoyed...

regards

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