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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
“Whisper to me” Cotton print makes little sound Sliding off skin But I’d hear the sough of it Puddle Naked of pretense and pretend And in quiet listen Hoping to feel you breathe Words of desire My ears are almost deaf To the subtle Still waves sound In undulations of air across time Relative perhaps to memory In such way as to inversely affect will But I wait Anticipating the feel Against my neck and across my chest Of syllables uttered in back of throat Escaping slowly the bonds Of “how?” I watch your lips move Full curve around each sound And wonder how it would feel To be spoken by you In whisper |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Ah, yes. Whispering .... the feather of speech. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
" watch your lips move Full curve around each sound And wonder how it would feel To be spoken by you In whisper" ~ This is my kind of "speech therapy". May you both enjoy the whispering! EA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Anticipating the feel Against my neck and across my chest Of syllables uttered in back of throat Escaping slowly the bonds Of “how?” I watch your lips move Full curve around each sound And wonder how it would feel To be spoken by you In whisper ============================== sometimes you just make me speechless .. hard to talk with a mouthful of sighs.  ( or is that mothful) *chuckling* heh |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat, A delight to read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I watch your lips move Full curve around each sound And wonder how it would feel To be spoken by you In whisper" .......Damn. listen as I whisper. Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sometimes more is heard in a whisper. Wow Capt, this is just incredible as is all you write. This just captured me while I read. |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
This is wonderful! Just so sexy and provocative, but with such class. I love this. smiles, Constance |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Sorry Ron but this was too good... so I hijacked the theme (my perspective of course)... Today I am grasshopper. (I wonder if that is different from any other day?)  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*sigh* |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 I'm thinking here that braille might be a subject I may not mind learning from this therapist too? |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Ron Yep, what Constance said!  |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Hi Ron, ditto what the rest said. and hmm, i savoured these thought-provoking lines...(or perhaps i am just ignorant? hee) Relative perhaps to memory In such way as to inversely affect will |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, YES. *S* This definitely wakes some thoughts. *G* |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Now yassee Hair?....At my age..I wouldn't be able to hear it?....Whether it be a whisperous laugh or a silent compliment.... |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I watch your lips move Full curve around each sound And wonder how it would feel To be spoken by you In whisper'''' ...sigh...  There's a place I like to hide-open your mind to me-Visualise your dream- Record it in the present tense, I am smiling next to you, in silent lucidity |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
mmm, yes very sensual...a deeper sensual.. encompasses body, mind, spirit... "deaf" or not, the heart always hears...ALWAYS... just a matter of if you want to deny yourself or let the feelings lead you.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
*sigh* feathering me again, you are |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"I watch your lips move Full curve around each sound And wonder how it would feel To be spoken by you In whisper" WOW, what a closer to an exquisitely senual write. Wow -- "to be spoken by you in whisper ......jo |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
"Cotton print makes little sound Sliding off skin But I’d hear the sough of it Puddle Naked of pretense and pretend And in quiet listen Hoping to feel you breathe Words of desire" And we spend all that dang money at Victoria's secret on slinky thangs...when cotton does the trick. Says a lot doesn't it. Keep it simple, keep it off. LOL! You know I love this. Love, Reg |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You could go deaf and blind... and still make great use of braille... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
goodness.... whew... *cough*  can't tell you how much I like this!! soooo good to read you again |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I liked this poem alot -Juju- |
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