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Paula Finn
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0 posted 2004-06-24 09:22 AM



You don't even know who I am
yet you roll your eyes
and smile that oh so
self rightous smile.
You judge
before you ask one question
You condemn
before you look just one time
You execute
that bitter final blow
All without knowing
Who I am.

© Copyright 2004 Paula Finn - All Rights Reserved
Snowflake From Hell
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1 posted 2004-06-24 09:24 AM


heyyyy i have those days everyday...good job mother dearest :P

The fear I see when I look in your eyes makes you believe I'm one of a kind

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state of mind
2 posted 2004-06-24 12:34 PM


likewise
enjoyed
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

LeeJ
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3 posted 2004-06-24 01:38 PM


very good
kaile
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singapore
4 posted 2004-06-25 01:50 PM


darn those "you"s!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-06-25 01:54 PM


Excellent write...
How true...how can someone judge when they don't even know who you are!!
Hugs~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2004-06-25 02:04 PM


understanding this
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7 posted 2004-06-28 11:59 PM


Prejudgment is so much easier and more satisfying....like tearing down the statue is so much simpler than sculpting it ever was....

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jwesley
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8 posted 2004-06-29 12:24 PM


absolutely LOVED this!   and you're the prof., me the student, my friend.

jwesley

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9 posted 2004-06-29 02:09 PM


This is wonderful... how I wish I didn't understand the truth of it! *S*
Earth Angel
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10 posted 2004-06-29 02:20 PM



I know who you are! You are a poetess with insight and wisdom and a woman who deserves better! ~ much, much better!

Don't be such a stranger Paula! I've missed you and your poetry!

Huggums,
EA

Paula Finn
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11 posted 2004-06-30 09:41 AM


Thanks everyone...Earth Angel I truly try to get here as often as I can, but school pretty well has me tied up. Thanks again
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