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copper and jean bark

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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 06-24-2004 08:52 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger

I rode behind you
on purpose
but you wore handles
for my hands
by accident

you noticed the tree of me
liked the valley of you
so we explored the fitting
making research noises
in the leaves

I remember you looking
up my tall
like I was a sky
and I felt your hand
where I dreamed

I tasted copper flavors
there were streams hidden
that told stories
day was under my jean bark
you left your handprints

on my memory skin


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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 06-24-2004 08:59 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Dark Stranger,
Reads sexy to me. LOL
Kahlil
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2 posted 06-24-2004 09:31 AM       View Profile for Kahlil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kahlil

Making research noises...sounds like fun.

And you are the sky, Mr. Stranger.

~K~
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3 posted 06-24-2004 09:49 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

as always sir.. well done
Janet Marie
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4 posted 06-24-2004 10:36 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

you noticed the tree of me
liked the valley of you
so we explored the fitting
making research noises
in the leaves

I remember you looking
up my tall
like I was a sky
and I felt your hand
where I dreamed
==========================


I have to agree with my Sy-guy. lol

me thinks the leaves were blushing
Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 06-24-2004 01:13 PM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

Goodness....*fanning myself*

Cold shower anyone??

Dang fine write.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Enchantress
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6 posted 06-24-2004 01:16 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

...saxxy write Dark..
sizzle of summer is back.
*smiling at you*

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

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7 posted 06-29-2004 12:14 AM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

You do this so very well....you're someone I need to read.

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jwesley
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Texas . . .


8 posted 06-29-2004 12:23 AM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

very very well conceived and written, my friend.

jwesley
passing shadows
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9 posted 06-29-2004 04:04 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

nice, yes
Dark Angel
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10 posted 06-29-2004 05:04 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

and I felt your hand
where I dreamed


ahuh...I feel this.

Sexy indeed!

M

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

Honeybee
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11 posted 07-10-2004 10:10 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee

As always I LOVE your style and way with words, this is a sensual stunner and worthy of applause and a sigh....

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

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