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On the Park Bench at Dusk
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On the Park Bench at Dusk |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Much too long I had lingered in its song Although you Disagree It’s the tune of the city; Trucks rumble Racing by As copters circle the sky Children laugh Couples fight Counter points like day and night. Leave this seat I have my shadows to greet. Gloom |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I bet your day was better than mine  Me |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Children laugh Couples fight Counter points like day and night." Gloomer, this one......awhhhhh, so good -- to my likely very much!  ....jo |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I love just sitting and people-watching, as it slows down my pace. Hope you enjoyed for "sit" and Happy Forthcoming Birthday to you lest I forget Professor Gloom  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love that last line |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
*cough* Ah... Gloomy? Don't you owe me something?  (I miss Windy Girl everytime I use that face)This is outstanding (loved the counter points line)...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Professor Gloom Everone has shadows to greet. LOL Enjoyed |
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