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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-06-23 09:24 PM


...For Now

My mind, it wonders as
I eye the room where she sits in spirit.
I think of the laughter shared
leading up to these days
of blocked thought.

I could finish her sentences
but the pouting look on her face
reminds me not to.

So I leave the endings
up in the air
where she tries to grasp them
with hands
"that know not what they do."

I think of you,
and how I have left "us" for now.
How "wanting to share feelings"
are walled inside me
because it would break me
and I am already weak enough
when in your presence.

To be held and comforted
no more...no less
My Saturday Wish
allowing myself to be me...
for now.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2004 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Professor Gloom
Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression
1 posted 2004-06-23 10:19 PM


There is no way to plan,
The tower and death are in the hand,
Tarot poker of the future
Things left to their nature
Too much sadness and change lingers
The fates twine fingers
Then dance a circle round
Till predictions devastation sounds

Gloom

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2004-06-23 10:25 PM


Thank you, Gloom
for understanding~

M

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
3 posted 2004-06-24 12:23 PM


Maureen, first things first....*hugs*....now about the poem -- very visual and my heart just aches with you and her when I read (you're in my thoughts and prayers).  Beautiful write despite the pain.  .......jo
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2004-06-24 02:59 AM


what can I say to make things better?

my heart is with you

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