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Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2004-06-23 02:19 AM


Summertime and women hang their clothes
from the fire-escapes of red-brick buildings.
I have learned to love this city's prose
staring at them from the street and shielding
zealous eyes from blinding rays, as I
walked to school and took in all the splendor.
Wearied, aged, and powerful, and tender, --
those were merely angels in the sky.


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iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2004-06-23 02:21 AM


I like seeing summer through your eyes -- enjoyed very much! ....jo
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2004-06-23 03:00 AM


expressive write
Corinne
Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion
3 posted 2004-06-23 05:27 PM


You've always had an artist's eye -- I'll bet you could paint that picture on a canvas just as easily as poetry pours out.

Love that last line!


Corinne

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
4 posted 2004-06-23 07:34 PM


Enjoyed this.  I can picture the sight.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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