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Kristabell
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Oceans made shallow,
Mountains become small,
Rivers turn calm,
Sun fades dim,
Snows are dulled,
When compared to,
Our love.

Ocean vastness,
Mountain height,
River swiftness,
Sun glimmers,
Snow sparkles,
When we are,
Together.

You took my heart,
And kept it safe,
You took my breath away,
Such a beautiful mind, heart, and soul,
Everything I could ask for,
Plus so much more,
I am yours to the end,
I am beyond content.
© Copyright 2004 Kristabell - All Rights Reserved
Kristabell
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I just wanted to say good bye for the summer everyone. I am leaving. I have no computer at home anymore. I hope all of you enjoy your summers. Make the most of them!!! I will be back when the summer has ended. I wish you all the best!
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Kristabell,
I like what you did with this! It is a unique and fun approach. Hope you had a great summer and will be writing more soon!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

 
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