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Open Poetry #32

A Conversation In The Dark-Even When We Grow Old

alibaster
Member

since 2001-07-07

Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).

0 posted 2004-06-22 04:48 PM

"What are you thinking?"

"Nothing, really, simply, daydreaming."

"Did your day go well?"

"Well? Same ole, same ole, different day in hell."

"Do you still love me like you used too?"

"If I didn't feel the same I wouldn't be here with you."

"Do you think the darkness feels?"

"Feels what?"

"Feels us sleeping beneath it?"

"I think it knows we are present."

"I can tell you are smiling."

"I am not, you're lying."

"Do you think our inner selves want to be let out?"

"I do. If not my little voice wouldn't scream and shout."

"You know I love you."

"I do."

"I'm cold."

"Come closer, I always promise to hold you…even when we grow old."

"I love you."

"I love you too."

a-alibaster June 22, 2004

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."-alibaster

"If it doesn't bite, scratch, and make you bleed it isn't worth it"-alibaster

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-06-22 04:51 PM

Awww...this is adorable..I love it!
And, a clever idea at that!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2004-06-22 05:06 PM

nice

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-06-22 08:30 PM

This is a great play on conversation. I like it!

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

4 posted 2004-06-22 09:31 PM

sometimes its the simple moments, eh?

All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-06-23 03:03 AM

this is precious

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