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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2004-06-22 08:49 AM



dinner at the y knot
taxi eyes got her sunday gown
all tucked into the shimmy shine

cajun chicken ain't really
he just don' drive fast
in the ol' caddy lackeur

when the smooth leg girl
has her glow skin on
and a sip of gin chin grin

john boat has the hives
splinters got the itchy ends
when she sits for super

says mud bug blood is good
for the nails, makes em strong
for pullin onions and snakes

she promises lies like rain
has a mouthful of spit to speak
but says dancin ain't a sin

cept when ya think bout it after

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2004-06-22 09:01 AM


she promises lies like rain
has a mouthful of spit to speak
but says dancin ain't a sin

cept when ya think bout it after


Oh yeah DS, the thinkin about it after...
lol...as always sir, your words amaze me..
Good mornin babe.

LeeJ
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2 posted 2004-06-22 09:04 AM


very much enjoyed this but I feel so sad for not only her, but the so many lives she will perhaps touch in a negative way.  And yet, perhaps through you she will grow?  I hope so, God bless.
Martie
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3 posted 2004-06-22 09:52 AM


DS

You are so unique!  

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2004-06-22 09:55 AM


Dark Stranger
Enjoyed the scrambles eggs for beakfast.  

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-06-22 09:57 AM


Dark....you do make me smile!!

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

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6 posted 2004-06-23 09:37 AM


Not so dark, but definitely strange....I like this stuff!

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Gaia
7 posted 2004-06-23 09:43 AM


would enjoy hearing this one read outloud
Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2004-06-23 09:45 AM


Thanks ya'll, for commin by the bayou for supper.it is my get away place there in thoughtney world....go back place with grins and greens....

thank you all for puttin up with me

Dark

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