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Goodknight
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0 posted 2004-06-21 08:35 PM


I stand accused
Of thinking too much
Shirking emotion
Shrinking from touch
But I am not guilty
Of shirking at all
Sometimes analytical
Sometimes withdrawn
But love the touch sensation
Love being so close
Intimacy beckons
I run all the way
Not just physical touch
But mind and hearts too
A soul thrown in offers
So much for the stew
So accuse me of thinking
I do that yes I do
And not always feeling
The same as another might do
But I care for the many
Who struggle and wait
For closeness with someone
Especially their mate


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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2004-06-21 08:57 PM


"But love the touch sensation
Love being so close
Intimacy beckons
I run all the way
Not just physical touch
But mind and hearts too
A soul thrown in offers
So much for the stew"

~ Now that is one fine recipe for love!


Linda

iliana
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2 posted 2004-06-21 09:03 PM


Paul, thanks for sharing this side of you.  Enjoyed the poem very much!  
Martie
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3 posted 2004-06-21 09:12 PM


Paul

"Not just physical touch
But mind and hearts too
A soul thrown in offers
So much for the stew
So accuse me of thinking
I do that yes I do"

Yep, you are a special man!  

Enchantress
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4 posted 2004-06-21 09:16 PM


Wonderful insight to this side of you Paul...
Very much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Sadelite
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5 posted 2004-06-21 11:59 PM


Paul,
   This is absolutely wonderful.  It describes how I pictured you-a person who gives his all.  May I keep this one?
          Sadelite
          

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6 posted 2004-06-22 02:29 AM


good write

I totally understand

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7 posted 2004-06-23 09:46 AM


It's a hard balance to hit, isn't it? I used to think too much and feel almost nothing....now I feel too much and I have to admit that there are occasions when I think almost nothing......

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Tequilia_Sunrise
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8 posted 2004-06-23 12:16 PM


good write
ThUnDeRkYsS
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9 posted 2004-06-23 01:37 PM


Good message in this one, nice things to think about indeed.  Thanks for sharing.

Brian

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



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