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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2004-06-21 07:28 AM



Barely a glance exchanged,
yet our shadows dance
the familiar steps of lovers
circling this runner's trail,

touching hands, interlocking hearts,
we've sashayed on miles of grey asphalt,
my eyes cast down in safety's embrace,
unsure if yours are yet ready to receive them,

nights accumulation, empty branches fill
with summer's song that strums the air,
sychonicity of all that fills the page in green,
a final bow before all colors blacken, then fade,

the stage is set
the players here

as i wonder how to reach you,

as i wait upon this sunset view
one more night,
amid the flirtation of cast shadows.

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2004-06-21 07:35 AM


nkedgoddess
Super write. Good morning

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2004-06-21 12:48 PM


sometimes reaching is only good enough for shadows
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-06-21 12:50 PM


Beautiful beautiful write Michele..
Very much enjoyed.
Hugs~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2004-06-21 02:09 PM


"as i wait upon this sunset view
one more night,
amid the flirtation of cast shadows."

~ My goodness, I could read you forever...


Linda

bklynboy
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florida
5 posted 2004-06-21 05:48 PM


Very nice and unique. Good job my dear!
inkedgoddess
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6 posted 2004-06-21 05:51 PM


thanks for stopping in
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