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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-06-20 09:32 PM



The mind will tender prisms in the ways of ancient prints
Dressed in the spirit of the woods, I have followed shining glints
Of your magic

Sprinkled on the grass
Fondling my steps to be assured attentive pass

Then hidden, as the mist of morning cloaks a soft horizon
Bearing tears to brim in thrall of heavens heart its siphon

Awash and new
Again to see in colors blown in seeds of optimistic winds
A love as this resplendent in its nature, greater grown in spins

Seeking virgin soils, finding first to travel paths
Dreaming to familiar feel its afterglow and aftermaths

Well your hidden coves brought forth on wistful sighs
Standing there beyond my reach, and soft beseeches rise

And I have come to find your truest self
Among the daisy chains, across a continental shelf
Signaling to chemistries inside

That fairs the enth degrees of far and wide
And distance becomes a measurement of pride
The space between a single side

Copyright Kkh 6/20/04

© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519

1 posted 2004-06-21 12:21 PM


It's good to read your work again, T.D.  You have golden words.
                 Sadelite

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2004-06-21 03:41 AM


how do you do that?
Kevo
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since 2004-06-02
Posts 466
Navarro County, Texas, USA
3 posted 2004-06-21 05:52 AM


Such an impressive and tender poem.  You write with such clarity.  I can't fathom the gift you have been given in rhyme.  I have written some good rhyming poems but your rhyming is of a caliber well above my own.  Great one!

Kevin

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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4 posted 2004-06-21 10:46 AM


Beautiful!

Eric

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