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Muys
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since 2002-04-06
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The Netherlands

0 posted 2004-06-20 03:57 PM



Dutch poem with a translation by Titia

Zondagmorgen is het haasten
Wil ik bidden voor mijn naasten
Sta dan veel te laat weer op
En geef mijzelf dan op mijn kop
Wassen, kleden en wat eten
Tandenpoetsen, niet vergeten
Nu maar heel vlug naar beneden
Toch op tijd, ik ben tevreden
Maar dan gaat er weer iets mis
U raadt vast al wat dat is
Ben mijn sleutels weer eens kwijt
En dat kost me heel veel tijd
Ineens is daar de telefoon
Op zo'n harde rinkeltoon
Ik neem hem op en hoor "Moemoe,
moet je naar de kerk toe?"
"Nee hoor schat, het is geen moeten"
Maar dan roept ze:
"Doe God van mij maar eens de groeten".

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Early Sunday, rushing quickly as I can
If I am to pray for my fellow men
Again I've overslept this morning
Scolding myself with a little warning
Washing, clothing, grabbing something to eat
Making sure my teeth look neat
Rushing downstairs, qualified
Just in time, I'm satisfied
But something's going terribly wrong
It's the same thing all along
Displayed my keys and I don't know where
Won't be on time for prayers to share
Suddenly the phone is ringing
Loud and clear it's voice is singing
I'm taking it up and this is what I hear:
"Do you have to go to church my dear?"
I respond: "It's never been a must you see"
But she's already shouting:
"Say hello to God some day, will you, from me"



Life on the internet begins at...90!

[This message has been edited by Muys (06-20-2004 07:15 PM).]

© Copyright 2004 Muys Schram de Jong-Meyst - All Rights Reserved
Kevo
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1 posted 2004-06-20 04:33 PM


Endearing read.  I really enjoyed it and appreciated it from both sids.  My wife revels in Sunday Morning services.  It is I usually on the other end telling her to say hello for me.  One of my many faults.  I had it force-fed when I was younger and think on some level it still discourages me.  I am trying to overcome that though.  I attend with her on occasion and devoutly believe and have faith, and pray and do all of those things.  I have a Christian heart.  To that end I appreciate the inspirational write.  Just can't seem to get there with her every week.  Take care.

Kevin

Titia Geertman
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2 posted 2004-06-20 07:21 PM



Oh oh, I know you, rushing down those stairs at the age of nearly 93 and rushing upstairs again because you mislayed your keys.

Take care Mommy Muys.

I love your poem

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-06-21 03:51 AM


oh how I love this!
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2004-06-22 01:31 AM


DearestSweetMuys~
You are a ray of light that shines with a smile~
LOVE YOUR POEM~

*Huglets* from Delaney and Landry~

*Huglets* from me~
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

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5 posted 2004-06-22 07:28 PM


It is a shame when it becomes a must.

There is a lovely little smile in this poem.

All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill


Susan
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walking the surreal
6 posted 2004-06-22 08:39 PM


Big smile.  Much fun.  And how exciting to find a poet from the Netherlands, it is a fine land.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Larry C
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7 posted 2004-06-22 08:45 PM


Momma Muys,
What a dear you are to me. Bi-lingual is a skill that always amazes me. But not half as much as your energy and zest for life. Such a fine perspective you have. Bless you dear friend. I think of you often.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2004-07-02 10:37 PM


Very nice...James
Sunshine
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9 posted 2004-07-02 10:42 PM


Thank you for sharing a moment of your day, Muys...I think that very thing starts much earlier than 93, however...
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10 posted 2004-07-02 11:22 PM



Momma Muys, you and your poetry are ageless. It's so nice reading you again...and DON'T RUN!!!

iliana
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11 posted 2004-07-03 01:21 AM


Muys, I loved this poem and it's translation!  
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