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Rhythm Boy |
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MexicoCityBlues Junior Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 48The Point of Know Return |
(I appologize for posting this twice, but the last one was not all I wanted to fit in here. It was my fault I didn't check before submission. Thanks) Rumble me blindly Bass slap Shoe shake Speaker spoke Wallet broke Button boy pinned Shirt black glow Drum drum drum Waaaaaaaaaaaah Button boy pinned To floor breathing Waves rhythm boy Pot roast bean boil Burned sweat Kettle-tech pierce Laser love “Booger sugar…” Met words rhyme Doing time To try time Military hats and Shoot Fall off dance Bit button boy Spoke out “Booger sugar…” ZZZZylaphone Never slept stood Feet bumble Bee buzzed blew Ten shot kicks Psy- psy- psychedelic Slowly plays Tortoise time-wise We watched open eyes Blinding sound Distort my solo Blowing straw piano Saw blunt light Melodic muse Saw her crowd Shot off Slowly plays the tortoise Rumbling rhythm boy "Do you know? This world is totally fugazi." --Marillion |
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wornways Member
since 2001-10-18
Posts 204CA, USA |
Ah, I should have responded to this one. Slightly more coherent to me with the added material, but not enough so that I can formulate any concrete understanding or interpretation of this. I just don't know where this is going or what it's saying. - |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Me, too. What a showoff, that rhythm boy! lol |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
thanks for sharing the view of the rumbling rhythm boy. i'd love to be there. ~K~ |
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