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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2004-06-19 09:59 PM



Pensive in my passing thoughts,
Of times so long ago,
Recalling days when we were young,
With wild seeds to sow.

Passions stirred the liquid fires,
That coursed through supple veins.
The days were of forever Spring,
~ The nights of summer rains.

Tho' the years sped quickly by,
Our love grew deeper still,
We honored one another,
And we always will.

Pensive in my passing thoughts,
Of times so long ago,
Recalling days when we were young,
With wild seeds to sow.

© Copyright 2004 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
Susan
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1 posted 2004-06-19 10:34 PM


Passions stirred the liquid fires,
That coursed through supple veins.
The days were of forever Spring,
~ The nights of summer rains.

Enjoyed this very much.  Hmmm, must be something in the air, passions are stirring.

  Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2004-06-19 10:50 PM


Susan ~

This poem was inspired by two phone calls this evening. Both my parents and my boyfriend's parents are obviously still sooooo much in love after all their years of marriage ~ however, unlike in my poem, liquid fire still runs through their, albeit not as supple, veins!

Warm hugs,
Linda

Rick
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3 posted 2004-06-19 10:54 PM


Dear Linda, this was fantastic, I loved it, I am glad you and partner feel the same way, may you have love forever.

Sincerely
Rick

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2004-06-19 11:04 PM


Rick, thank you so much! ~ and yes, my partner in life and I feel the very same way! I guess it is in both our genes! lol

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda

gemjop
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5 posted 2004-06-24 08:42 AM


This made me smile, and it is more than a passing thought...a thought to keep?

love how you did this one linda.

Enchantress
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6 posted 2004-06-24 08:51 AM


Very lovely Linda...and quite lyrical.
All love should be so lasting.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2004-06-24 09:04 AM


Earth Angel
Excellent write and read.

Snowflake From Hell
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8 posted 2004-06-24 09:15 AM


hey there...nicely written

The fear I see when I look in your eyes makes you believe I'm one of a kind

iliana
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9 posted 2004-06-25 04:38 PM


Yeah, we do have those passing thoughts, don't we, Earth Angel....I'm glad for you those seeds still grow!  huggles......jo
Goodknight
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10 posted 2004-06-25 08:03 PM


wonderful passion and reflection here - I just loved it - Paul
Earth Angel
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11 posted 2004-06-26 02:06 AM


gemdrop ~

I love it when you "smile", Dear Sweet English Rose!

Loves 'n smiles,
LL

Earth Angel
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12 posted 2004-06-26 02:07 AM


Mr. T. ~

An "E" from Mr. T.! Now that is the mark of excellence! lol

Big Hug,
EA

Earth Angel
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13 posted 2004-06-26 02:07 AM


Hot Flakes ~

Howdy, Hotty! ~ & thanx!


EA

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2004-06-26 02:09 AM


iliana ~

Hi, lovely Lily Lady! Yeppers! The seeds are sprout a beautiful rose garden of love! lol

Huggums,
Linda

Earth Angel
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15 posted 2004-06-26 02:09 AM


Paul ~

~ & "I just loved" your thoughtful response to my little love poem!


Linda

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