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Rain Watch |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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i want to watch the rain today fall helplessly from the sky, drizzle down through sunday's sleep feel the cloud's heart cry, watch it by the window seat, the scene as life pours by, feel the sadness which it speaks, the reasons i know why. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
You have given the rain life. Lovely.  SusanThe whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Mmm..evaporation, and the skies recycled tears. |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
Not me! We got 32 inches in April. 10" in 3 hours. I have had enough of Thunderstorms, rain, tornado watches and warnings, hail, etc. to last me for the rest of the year. The sky doesn't cry here. It screams bloody murder! Now that I've vented a little, I really enjoyed your poem and the way you gave life to our unpredictable sky. I enjoy the rain too when it doesn't do it every day. I'm not so tainted to not understand and appreciate your message and sentiments. It was beautifully written and tender. Kevin |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Good write, my friend - have never tired of rain - not even when it rains every day. I may have wished it hadn't caused some of the problems it did when it becomes excessive, but I have never tired of rain... jwesley |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
window seats are nice |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Inkedgooddess.....understood. I have days like that, too. Good penning.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess A lovely write, enjoyed. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Those times that thirst to pour, leave a peaceful emptiness in their stead... The sun always waits its turn you know? TD |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
how you have captured the wistfulness that comes with watching the rain...nice write |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for walking in the rain with me |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Gotta love the rain....best time to get intimate |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Michele...much enjoyed a walk in the rain with you. Hugs~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Nothing like sitting in the screened in porch at night, dry and protected during one of our many crashing thunderstorms. Beautiful descriptions and imagery and a nice picture too  Brian Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
Rain is the water of life, can't say I have viewed it from a sad point of view. Nice write. |
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