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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Lashes light Spheres flash white Their flicker wide to close Onto blue in shutter goes Words that undulate Calm, be still my fate Blown back enthrall Flavors whisp and fall Silence broken Shatters spoken Leaving sight to form All that graces warm To fill in oval glass An overflow may pass And taste the sea In tears of glee Of depth to rim Lashes light All eyes to brim Copyright Kkh 6/18/04 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And raiseys raised on moonlit night, perhaps huh? Liked this one....cute, nice flow... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
enjoyed reading this, my friend...liked the way it closed too. jwesley |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Much enjoyed the rhythm and flow of this.  SusanThe whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
Exceptional and flowing. I thoroughly enjoyed it. It brimmed with diamond light. Kevin |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very dance-like enjoyed |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
A beautiful flow of words! Eric |
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