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Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

0 posted 2004-06-17 07:37 PM

Resting for the onslaught thought
Delving into emotion lotion
Wrestling with the soulful bowl full
Walking over the bridge of pain ridge
Tempting thoughts offer draughts
Blinking eyes offer denies
Edging feeling toward the ceiling
Wanting this over smelling the clover
Enough already mindlessness steady
Took so long to sing the song
Flitted away lost the day
Time moves on missed the dawn
Noble refrain went down the drain
Is this going on afraid all along
That words all a flutter would make us all stutter
But the end is in sight asleep for the night

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2004-06-17 07:56 PM

tee hee

Enjoyed.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

2 posted 2004-06-17 07:58 PM

Hello, GoodKnight,
It is so good to read your words again! It sounds like a lot has been going on lately. Enjoyed your poem and will read it again when I'm fresher. I'll try to stop back tomorrow if I can, but I just couldn't wait to say, "Hello and thanks for posting again."
Sadelite

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2004-06-17 08:24 PM

Neat write Paul !! Enjoyed. Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-06-17 09:22 PM

"Walking over the bridge of pain ridge"

Very much enjoyed the write Paul...
love the above line!!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-06-18 02:25 AM

Great write, Paul! Really, excellent!

....jo

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2004-06-18 11:13 AM

Paul...I sounds like you had a very full day! Greatly enjoyed your powm!

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

7 posted 2004-06-18 10:00 PM

thanks everyone - sometimes a lot of energy goes into thinking...

Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

8 posted 2004-06-19 11:16 AM

interesting

I really like this

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-06-19 01:00 PM

neat write

sounds like it just flowed off your tongue onto the screen

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