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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2004-06-17 09:05 AM



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Ships sailing at night,
Pass each other in silence.
Fog horn sounds warning.
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© Copyright 2004 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-06-17 09:17 AM


hmmm, interesting

Reminds me of a special place I go at the New Jersey shore....When I sleep, love to open the window, b/c the fog horn's voice blows all night long...oh, how I love that sound....which is what your poem reminded me of


Good one!

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2004-06-17 09:22 AM


Earth Angel,
Read my poem to you.

Pilgrimage
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3 posted 2004-06-17 10:57 AM


This is a beautiful expression. Not only is the picture presented quite lovely, but the interior meaning is clear.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2004-06-17 11:05 AM


Lee ~

I love the sound of fog horns as well! When I was a little girl I lived by the ocean in New Brunswick and have wonderful recollections of my life there during my early years.


Linda

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2004-06-17 11:08 AM


Mr. T. ~

Your reply certainly was a very pleasant surprise! I read "I Could" and am totally delighted by both the poem and your thoughtfulness, my sonneteering friend! It most certainly is a !

~ and to have a poem written for me by such an illustrious poet, makes it all the sweeter!

Thank you!
Angel blessings & hugs,
EA

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2004-06-17 11:10 AM


Pilgrimage ~

I very much enjoyed reading your reply! Thanks, Pilgrim!

Have a super duper day!
Big hug,
EA

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7 posted 2004-06-17 11:39 AM


Hello, sweet lady. I hope that you're
doing good. This was another peaceful poem.
i enjoyed reading, as all of your work.
Hugs,
Ethel

iliana
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8 posted 2004-06-17 11:48 AM


I like this one -- gave a nice visual, too!   .....jo
Susan
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9 posted 2004-06-17 12:09 PM


Mmmmm, i'm on the ship, I can feel the fog across my face and hear the horn. Nice one--

  Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

Earth Angel
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10 posted 2004-06-17 12:39 PM


Ethel Mae ~

I enjoy writing poems that give me a sense of peace as well!

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda Lou

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11 posted 2004-06-17 01:54 PM


iliana ~

Thank you! I'm glad that you liked it!

The sound of a fog horn seeps into every cell of my body!


Linda

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12 posted 2004-06-17 01:54 PM


Susan ~

Exactly!

Kindred hugs,
Linda

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