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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2004-06-17 07:48 AM




Anticipation
loves rhapsody enticing
sigh songs to be sung.


It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}


[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (06-17-2004 08:38 AM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-06-17 07:49 AM


Gentle Spirit,
And a lovely moning to you.

Kevo
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2 posted 2004-06-17 07:54 AM


You managed to remind me of what an incredible feeling the anticipation of love is with very few words.  Thank you so much for sharing this little tid-bit.  It packed a heck of a punch in those couple of words.  Well done.

Kevin

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3 posted 2004-06-17 08:14 AM


Your use of alliteration literally gave the poem a rhapsodotic feel to it!

Mornin' hug,
Linda


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4 posted 2004-06-17 08:48 AM


Liquid air surrounds
Coo of mourning doves first greet
Anticipation

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5 posted 2004-06-17 09:22 AM


Excellent Donna!!
I love this!
Hugs~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

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6 posted 2004-06-17 10:07 AM


ahhhhh, sigh

Beautiful

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just out of reach
7 posted 2004-06-17 10:22 AM


lovely Donna. enjoyed. hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

Gentle Spirit
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8 posted 2004-06-18 09:04 AM


My friends, my thanks go out to you all..
Happy Friday!

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2004-06-18 10:11 AM


haiku erotics
short skirt with wind lift whispers
blind man hears the silk

lovely edges ms

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10 posted 2004-06-18 10:25 AM


enjoyed
Gentle Spirit
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11 posted 2004-06-18 11:02 AM


DS~ only you-yep only you...
thanks for the blow by sigh
and smile...*kotc*

Vandana thanks so much good to see you.

It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

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