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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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No words need be spoken All is said within a touch A moment’s breath upon cheek The caress of a glance No words need be spoken To know the depth of you To feel the breadth of you To know the love I have for you Shhhhh . . . No words need be spoken Let’s sit quietly now Eternity held within our hush Immensity spoken within our silence. S.A.T. The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
language spoken between hearts. This reminded me of the song "You say it best, when you say nothing at all". touching write! :-) pictureme :-) |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Pictureme, yes much is said in silence. Thank you for your replay,  SusanThe whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just know your special someone is going to smile reading this gorgeous dedication of love from your golden heart, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Noah, you are most kind, and I am warmed by your reply. Thank you so much -- Hugs -- SusanThe whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Susan Your words speak so very clearly to me and I can relate so very well. "He who, silent, loves to be with us, and he who loves us in our silence, has touched one of the keys that warm hearts" Take care.........Sue I am in motion |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this is such a lovely phrase "The caress of a glance" ....your ending is exquisite! loved it... |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I love the feel of this one. I hear the warmth within the hush. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Sue, Steavenr and Pilgrimage, thank you so much -- Hugs. SusanThe whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
lovely words and concept. Very much enjoyed. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
LeeJ, most kind. Thank you. SusanThe whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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