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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2004-06-16 03:27 PM


a)
The seed within the mind
Grows in its expression
Questioning growth of clarity
Challenging wings of perception
Liberated thoughts of delivery
Born inside inner faith
Blossoming dance of individuality
Dynamics of free speech
Un-tethered from fear.

Death of darkness,
Silenced total stillness
Smothered full compliance
Imprisoned hopelessness
Doom of humanity
Kiss of a vampire
Draining independent words,
Constitutional decay
Faded rights, muted silence.

Singing birds hatched free,
Awakened warmth of Spring,
Un-cloned revival of revitalization,
Baby of the sovereign womb
Crying its first breathe,
Humanities children
Again running unabated
Naked inside reasoning
Refusing to die silenced.

b)
My own poet’s voice
Screams in hidden valleys
Echoing upon its destruction
Hoping intensity rebuilds,
Quaking open an awakening.
Having been heard
Is to say I have existed.
Yet I must dig deeper
To treasure words more.

The mirror of a poet’s words
May reflect within themselves
But it is in the audience
That a poet’s hopes treasures.
Here the dreams are fulfilled
From the reflection of meanings,
Each an exquisite gem,
Reflective images of clarity,
Perceived from different directions.

The ghost of writing
Will never honor only one.
Honor can only be attained,
Remembered beyond their time
Living beyond physical death.
Seed of their words germinating
Inside inquisitive minds
Studying free expression in the
Silence of the Awakened Mind.

D.Lester Young
6/14/04



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iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2004-06-16 03:52 PM


"Seed of their words germinating
Inside inquisitive minds
Studying free expression in the
Silence of the Awakened Mind."

Great lines, these.  Enjoyed!

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2004-06-16 04:33 PM


Much thought here, very deep.  Great write.
Enjoyed!

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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