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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-06-15 10:40 PM



Sensibilities favor elegance
Set of crystal and china plates on checkered cloth
My dreams stay with you
In a private meeting place dreamt only between our minds entwined
Where you arrive in leather...motoring the open road on two wheels gleaming in the sun
My invitation would include a summer dress, low cut and breezy, painted nails and only as I was born to be
The favored things that I have found in me
And all that I have found in you has graced a smile that would stream a country mile
Where the cool of water from my hand lifts the suns
Streaks from my neck
And I know given only the engagement of your eyes
The lava brought to stir would for certain rise
And if another has loved you through this time, it is no less of yours and mine
For I have been beside your heart each morning rise
And every night beside you lay my heart in moon's sweet lies
To feast from a garden said happiness
Filling in the voids with an embrace of weightlessness, and courage comes
It comes in truth that reverently beats my heart
All that should be fulfilled

Copyright Kkh 6/15/04

© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
marcel
Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660
az, usa
1 posted 2004-06-16 12:05 PM


beautiful description and flow.....i love poetry when it is so smooth going down and it makes you want to read more. i think i have found my mentor!
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2004-06-16 12:10 PM


TD -- NOW THAT IS A PICNIC!  I could have just seen this!  Beautiful poem!   ...jo
Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2004-06-16 12:11 PM


I would love a private luncheon such as this that you so vividly and invitingly describe!


EA


pictureme
Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248
Ohio, USA
4 posted 2004-06-16 12:24 PM


A beautiful feast that I enjoyed!
nice job,
pictureme :-)

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