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Suetang
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0 posted 2004-06-15 10:30 PM



Picture by Jim Warren

* * *

We lay down amongst the lupins
High above the windswept shore
We know this place so well
We've been here many times before

I am on top of the world
Safe and warm in your embrace
I watch a smile appear
As I reach up and touch your face

We search the far horizons
As we gaze across the sea
Your love fills my inner being
And you become a part of me

When I'm with you I'm complete
And I see love in all its glory
As we indulge in the next chapter
Of love's neverending story

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2004 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
marcel
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1 posted 2004-06-16 12:18 PM


I am still searching for such a love---Your sweet words and passionate verses give me hope........
pictureme
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2 posted 2004-06-16 12:28 PM


loved the pic! and also your happily ever after love shines thru.
Definately written from heart experience.
pictureme :-)

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11
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3 posted 2004-06-16 04:43 AM


Suetang,
   This is so sweet, happy, and refreshing!
           Sadelite

JL
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4 posted 2004-06-16 04:42 PM


This is beautiful poetry!  Excellent art work too.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


Earth Angel
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5 posted 2004-06-16 05:49 PM


I absolutely adore your romantic writes, Sensuous Sue!

You should write a Harlequin Romance novel!

To love & romance,

Linda


Goodknight
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6 posted 2004-06-16 07:26 PM


Sue - you write of love like no other - it is only someone who knows it so well that can write it so well - loved this Paul
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7 posted 2004-06-16 07:29 PM


Hi Sue T.  you are doing very well with
your poetry and your imagery.  Envious
might be the word...Keep growing,  your
limit is somewhere beyond the stars...

rwood
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8 posted 2004-06-16 09:04 PM


You are still overflowing with captivating passionspeak, neverending I pray. Hugs to you dear lady.

Love,
Reg

Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia
9 posted 2004-06-16 10:50 PM


marcel - I wish you well in your quest for love and thank you for reading my words.

pictureme - Thank you for your lovely words.

Sadelite - I am glad you liked my words.

JL - Thank you so very much.

Linda - You always humble me greatly.

Paul - It's nice to see you and your kind words.

Barry - You honour me with your gracious words for which I am truly humbled.

Regina - How lovely to see you again and I thank you for your heartfelt comment.  I hope all is well in your life.

Take care..........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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Member Patricius
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10 posted 2004-06-18 10:55 PM


Dear Sue:  Very beautiful and such a romantic setting too.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Suetang
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11 posted 2004-06-18 11:36 PM


Betty Lou - thanks so much for your comment.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

passing shadows
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12 posted 2004-06-19 05:10 AM


your heart amazes me at times
Goldenrose
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13 posted 2004-06-19 05:19 AM


Realy great writing here Sue..i especially liked the ending....thank you for the great words...

Goldenrose.

''Death where is thy sting? Love where is thy glory?'' William Shakespeare.

jwesley
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Spring, Texas
14 posted 2004-06-19 06:06 AM


wonderful piece of writing here Sue - of course I wouldn't expect any less of you.

Much enjoyed the read . . .

jwesley

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
15 posted 2004-06-19 06:35 PM


Dixie - I am always so grateful for your lovely words, thank you.

Phil - It is so nice to see you and I thank you for your kind words.

James - I am so very humbled by what you wrote, thank you.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Rick
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Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
16 posted 2004-06-20 08:14 AM


Dear Sue, this is beautiful my friend and very much enjoyed, thank you for sharing.

Sincerely
Rick

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