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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-06-15 07:56 PM


Little Grass Shack

"Take me back to my little
grass shack in Hawaii."

I'm on Waikiki beach
under the coconut tree
watching the pretty
wahine's going by.

I'm thinking maybe
I'll find my baby
strumming my ukulele
under the blue
Hawaiian sky.

JamesLee
June17
2004
wahine-Hawaiian word
for female or woman.
I have one that
I love.

© Copyright 2004 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2004-07-04 12:54 PM


nice
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-07-06 03:07 PM


sounds to me like your on an island somewhere, no fair, I want to be there to.

Smiles and hugs...good one.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2004-07-10 09:55 PM


Thank you passing shadows and LeeJ for the nice responses...James
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