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LeeJ
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0 posted 2004-06-15 11:26 AM


Touring your soul
Finding earth’s tentacles
Fibers reaching precious heirlooms
Swinging arms of a heart beating
Warm summer tenderness

Your mind views
Many signs and omens
Natural horizons
Engulfing us, with lips of evening song
Drinking us till done

Like an enthusiastic brass rail
Sharing camaraderie’s table
Potent enough to blindfold
Essence surrenders

Colliding with a chivalrous thief
Sorting future days serene
Folding edges into passionate memories
Rearranging crystals and years of distance

Spreading my dreams upon your seas
Yours upon mine, colors mingling
A great palate of wine
Where bright water lilies grow
Containing us both

Shaping heat and flame
Kind meadows lighten our eyes
Flashing ringlets of full moon smiles
Gold, silver, mirth, kindly taps on our window
motioning us to come hither

Delivering to us an anonymous place
Where we so eloquently vacation
All inclusive, your face upon my breast
I wear the sunbeam you gave me, round my neck

Like diamonds sparkling on a sea, it becomes me
Voids spent and clear, pulsing the face of purpose
Divine love gazes upon my thoughts, curious
Do you fear this power?
Inspiration bends above you, from heaven
All worth the waiting


© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Startime55
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1 posted 2004-06-15 11:57 AM


A vision and truth that touches the soul...Very well put...

Kevo
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2 posted 2004-06-15 12:01 PM


This was a magnificent bit of writing.  Imagery played to perfection.  Very passionate.  Eloquently painted for all to see, to watch, to feel.  This is a keeper.  Your talent really shines in this poem.  Thank you for sharing it.

Kevin

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-06-15 12:40 PM


wow Lee

awesome!

JL
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since 2004-04-01
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Texas, USA
4 posted 2004-06-15 01:31 PM


Brilliant write Lee J.  Enjoyed.

JL


She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


iliana
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5 posted 2004-06-15 04:10 PM


"Delivering to us an anonymous place
Where we so eloquently vacation
All inclusive, your face upon my breast
I wear the sunbeam you gave me, round my neck"

Lee, beautiful!  You just keep outdoing yourself!   ....jo


JamesMichael
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6 posted 2004-06-15 08:02 PM


Silky...one of my favorites...James
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7 posted 2004-06-16 04:59 PM


Lee,  your pen paints many colors...so
many visions,  pictures,  profound sights
that are felt....such a great feeling from
them.

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