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Ladybugs Looped
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Ladybugs Looped |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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Wilting white flowers paint a cross on the grass blow in the farmer's fields, stucco spoted sky silently sighing, merging with the hills of green receding beyond the horizontal line, little boy laughing lemon yellow caterpillar coiling around crayolas ladybugs looped in the strawberry patch, (somebody broke their promise today) the air is still free breathe.......... beneath a stoic sun the inkedgirl, the zenman, the trees and the falling rain, all scatter aimlessly as ants. [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-15-2004 07:12 AM).] |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
ladybugs looped in the strawberry patch, (somebody broke their promise today) ~*~ a misty garden, this... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"the air is still free breathe.........." ~ Yes, indeed!   EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love your free verse...yes I do |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very nice, this write has a calming effect! JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Enjoyed this, SusanThe whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
This is very soothing for ruffled feathers and such. Keep it up! |
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Kazm Member
since 2003-11-13
Posts 99 |
Poems like this one remind me of how far I have to go before I'm really a poet. It look like a very great distance. Kaz |
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