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Open Poetry #32

Thinking Of Him

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

0 posted 2004-06-15 02:47 AM

Written after listening to Country music singer
Marty Robbins, the song Some Memories Just Don’t Die

Thinking Of Him

Alone she sits
thinking of him
as she always does.

Her heart wants
to tell him how much
sheloveshim
but knows its wrong
and cannot be told.

On the radio the song plays
that she first
fell in love with him,
the tears come to her eyes
as she sits alone, thinks of him.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2004-06-15 03:55 AM

NIce writing...hugs...James

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-06-15 08:08 PM

I can feel the mood of a country song in this, and the lonliness.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

3 posted 2004-06-15 08:45 PM

sad kinda that she's thinking of him, but not of herself (when sharing of herself might even make him a better person...)
food for thought here

pictureme
Member

since 2003-11-28

Posts 248
Ohio, USA

4 posted 2004-06-16 12:35 PM

Hello Ms. froggy!
Long time no see! I know the song....and although some memories just don't die, I'm
so glad they lived! I'm glad to see you are writing!
Don't work too hard!
pictureme :-)

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

5 posted 2004-06-16 01:40 AM

Thank-you all for the wonderful comments.

:-)

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