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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2004-06-15 02:04 AM



A friend I lost
when everything changed
the step we took was a
chance to consider.

I had one idea you had
another I end up getting
hurt and you hide and
cover.

Tears fall from my
shady blue eyes salt
trickles down my rosey
cheeks as I wipe away my
sorrow with a old hankerchief

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


© Copyright 2004 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved
froggy
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since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
1 posted 2004-06-15 02:57 AM


Very good read.
I like it.

:-)

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2004-06-15 02:00 PM


So sad, but a very good write.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


Foxyoasis
Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
3 posted 2004-06-15 02:17 PM


thank you

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


Theory
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since 2004-05-04
Posts 23
N. CA. USA
4 posted 2004-06-15 03:16 PM


yes, nice
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