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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-06-14 08:52 PM



I Hear You


I listen to you even when
you don’t think I hear
and I think I am another
just like you caught between
this world and the next one
just trying to find the place
it is that I fit and the longing
I know your words I knew them
before I ever heard you say them
you know the ones, the ones that
are recited in the spaces between
the thread count in the sheets
of the echoing darkness of night
yes, I hear you and you are heard
and you are not alone, I am lonely too

"be prepared to bleed"  Joni Mitchell

© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
kaile
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1 posted 2004-06-15 01:56 AM


yes, I hear you and you are heard
and you are not alone, I am lonely too

good thoughts. sometimes, to be heard is enough

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2004-06-15 03:56 AM


Wow...touching...James
Ericc
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3 posted 2004-06-15 04:32 PM


Yes...wow..!!

Eric

iliana
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4 posted 2004-06-15 04:42 PM


And, you are a good listener!  Great write!  :hugs;...jo
icebox
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in the shadows
5 posted 2004-06-15 05:35 PM


Ah...one from the heart!

"...the ones that
are recited in the spaces between
the thread count in the sheets
of the echoing darkness of night"

Well done!

JL
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6 posted 2004-06-16 04:30 PM


"and you are not alone, I am lonely too"

What a close!  This is beautiful.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


Goodknight
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7 posted 2004-06-16 07:30 PM


terrific poetry here - just great - Paul
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