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Sunshine
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0 posted 2004-06-14 01:47 PM



Whimsical Weathering Ways – RF 2004

Where might one sit upon a roof so grand
Such that a weathered vane might one day stand
To point the ways of naughty, errant winds
That circle the world, and come to shake limbs



I thought about how big a roof might be
To hold one wolf’s blow, though but fantasy,
But the headless horseman’s horse that I spied
Would certainly make the winds moan and cry

So, though a price could have brought home the steed,
I have no such roof to fit the mount’s need.



© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2004-06-14 01:56 PM


Karilea, now that's a weather vane!  Great write!  Heard it's pretty windy up there today -- take care, I'll be thinking about you.   ......jo
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2 posted 2004-06-14 02:19 PM


Oooh Karilea!!!!  That would be perfect on  my roof!!!
Awww, I wish I had been there...
I would have scooped it up in no time flat!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

VAS
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3 posted 2004-06-14 02:53 PM


love the phrase "weathered vane" hehehehe LOL

What a vane!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

JL
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4 posted 2004-06-14 02:59 PM


Great one!  Enjoyed.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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