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Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
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0 posted 2004-06-13 07:55 PM


to make a wall a window
when attention pleads its urgency
finger the pane seductively
enter space where there’s no time
and breathing is discovery
till the vision of truth is shown


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iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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1 posted 2004-06-13 08:29 PM


Kahlil -- Very interesting penning -- thanks, I'm going to try it!
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-06-13 09:17 PM


Love this...very nice indeed.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Beki
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since 1999-09-15
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Newport Beach, CA, USA
3 posted 2004-06-13 09:39 PM


"enter space where there’s no time
and breathing is discovery"

Ilove that!

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