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Washed Away.

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exhale
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since 06-13-2003
Posts 648
Alberta,Canada


0 posted 06-12-2004 09:54 PM       View Profile for exhale   Email exhale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for exhale

the clouds are pregnent with rain
it's so cold in this house
i think i'll go sit outside
let the rain pour down my face
to hide my tears

i remember when you used to visit me
with only your smile
you chased away my tears

now i sit here
alone and empty
waiting for the sun to come
and chase away this rain

the rain is pouring down hard now
it feels like it won't stop
but i'm alright with that
i always am.

i feel so pathetic
giving my heart to someone who never wanted it
who never cared.
she's a musician,
like you
all i have to offer is my written words
flowing like this rain
all i have to offer is myself

with pages of my silly words emotions,
let the rain wash them away..

p.s wish me a happy birthday,it was thurs i'm now 15..not the best birthday..oh well
© Copyright 2004 Chelsea - All Rights Reserved
Copperbell
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since 11-08-2003
Posts 952


1 posted 06-12-2004 11:14 PM       View Profile for Copperbell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Copperbell

Thank you for sharing.  I hope many good things come your way girl.
jamesjiao
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since 04-12-2000
Posts 270
Backwaters of Avalon


2 posted 07-22-2004 04:20 AM       View Profile for jamesjiao   Email jamesjiao   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit jamesjiao's Home Page   View IP for jamesjiao

I have always been a big fan of your poems, exhale. You have been in my private library for quite some time now .. Happy birthday to you!

- James
The beauty of nature is displayed,
not through itself,
but through the creatures
dwelling within its bosom.


 
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