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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2004-06-12 04:51 PM



I waited for rose petals sweet
to drift upon my pillowed hair
I waited, but they never came
I slept alone with no one there.

I waited for the candles glow
to flicker round my bed at night
illuminators of romance
but love is no where in my sight.

I waited until I got bored
and bought a sheet of roses red
some candles of a fragrant scent
it seems I must make my own bed.

© Copyright 2004 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-06-12 04:54 PM


Hi sweetie!!  Welcome Home!
So good to read you again....I do hope you stay longer.
~Hugs & miss ya, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2004-06-12 05:00 PM


Cat!!!  Welcome home!
Gads, we've missed you!

ctowen
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Green Mountains of VT
3 posted 2004-06-12 06:31 PM


and in those shadows cast
awaits what's missing ...

love everlast

         you know you are missed
           when a name brings eyes to mist.


                       old or new, still kicking!!
            
                         *S

iliana
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4 posted 2004-06-12 06:42 PM


Good poem, and good for you.  We must love ourselves first then love can come!
Nightshade
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just out of reach
5 posted 2004-06-12 10:56 PM


Ah, yes,....hello dear poetess. So good to read your wonderful words once more!
Hope you are well and happy. hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
6 posted 2004-06-12 11:50 PM


CatalinaMoon~
It is so nice to open the pages and see you here~

A beauty~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2004-06-13 02:35 AM


Nice...sometimes we need to be alone to figure out if we're who we want to be...a time to focus on ourselves...but not for too long...James
passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2004-06-17 12:55 PM


I did that a long time ago

I know what you mean

jwesley
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9 posted 2004-06-18 04:36 AM


and glad am I that you reposted this beauty - I think I missed it back then; my loss - until today.

jwesley

BTW - had I known I'd have personally sent the roses and candles though a poor substitute they'd be.  jimmy

[This message has been edited by jwesley (06-18-2004 05:30 AM).]

Kevo
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10 posted 2004-06-18 05:24 AM


You write so incredibly beautifully.  Love has a funny way of showing up uninvited.  It's there waiting to crash the right party.  Your depiction of the wait lingers in my mind.  I read it earlier and had to return.  You have constructed a simply beautiful illustration of the absence of love...however temporary it may be.  Warm wishes to you in all endeavors, including love.

Kevin

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11 posted 2004-06-18 10:44 AM


nice
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