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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2004-06-11 07:06 PM


(Yay! (does happy dance) It's sooooooo great to be back! Here's a psychedelic acoustic I wrote to top my first post since the move! )

City of Roses
By: Noah Eaton
6/10/04

Through the flowers in her hair,
I can see the morning caress the Willamette,
waking from windowsill hallucinations,
to find myself back in the garden,
where the sun is as erubescent as your face,
shimmering of rain and quince tea,
the breeze but a young merry-andrew,
running through the wistoria arbor chasing a dream

I'm going to the City of Roses,
where we can be free in the garden,
I'm going to lie there with my yellow rose,
growing our love under the tulip tree

We see our shadows dancing,
down Hawthorne Boulevard,
she moves like a butterfly swimming in ambrosia,
cinnamon rainbow smile warming my heart,
her phosphorescent tarradiddle,
blows a splanchnic nerve,
spilling all my pride and instincts,
blending the colors of my dreams in one gentle swerve

I'm going to the City of Roses,
where we can be free in the garden,
I'm going to lie there with my yellow rose,
growing our love under the tulip tree

Through the flowers in her hair,
I could see the twilight gleam from the west hills,
she pulls a recherche touche,
her kiss of a thousand bumblebees has my lungs filled
felicity fills my femme fatale's flowery face,
let there be rain when she dreams of it,
because when the rain beads my sugar maple's hair,
I feel her love, I feel her honeybee kiss

I'm going to the City of Roses,
where we can be free in the garden,
I'm going to lie there with my yellow rose,
growing our love under the tulip tree

Butterfly angel,
show me the light in your wings,
butterfly angel,
you're my queen in the City of Roses
Butterfly angel,
show me the light in your wings,
butterfly angel,
you're my queen in the City of Roses


"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

© Copyright 2004 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2004-06-11 08:09 PM


Noah -- didn't realize you'd moved but I had been missing you.  Enjoyed the write!   ....jo
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2 posted 2004-06-11 11:15 PM


Well hello Noah !! So good to read your wonderful poetry once again. I do hope you like your new home.
This is a lovely, uplifting write.
Hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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3 posted 2004-06-12 04:40 PM


Hi Noah, This is beautiful. I hope you are very happy in your new home. Sounds like a great place!
Sandra

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4 posted 2004-06-13 08:36 AM


welcome back, friend! hope you had a good move! i really love this line you wrote

felicity fills my femme fatale's flowery face,

scorpio
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5 posted 2004-06-13 09:10 AM


Wonderful to read your words again.  You've been missed.

believe in what your heart feels...

HopeS
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6 posted 2004-06-13 12:30 PM


great to hear from you Noah , I have had  a close online friend that lives in Portland  Oregon ... I believe it must be the rose festival parade time  there soon

Hope

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7 posted 2004-06-13 12:44 PM


Ah, Noah, you're making me homesick!  What a wonderful place to live, and I'm so glad to hear that you're excited to be there.  Great write!   ~K~
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8 posted 2004-06-13 12:58 PM


Noah,
  I'm glad to read your up-beat poetry.  We've missed you.
                 Sadelite

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9 posted 2004-06-13 01:32 PM


Welcome back Noah...your words are as beautiful as ever!

Eric

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10 posted 2004-06-13 05:13 PM


Happy days are here again, my friend! You're back! Gadzooks, I've been missing you! I'm happy to hear that you are settled into the City of Roses! You sound so happy, my darlin', pioneering Angel Boy! Gosh, this song has really picked my spirits up! It is so full of joy, love, adventure, enthusiasm, spirit, beautiful imagery and sentiments, emotion, elation, ... lol Yeppers! I'm happy you made it safely to Portland and that you're gifting us with your wonderful poetry again! You are so ding dang special, my friend!

Two of my closest friend at Pip ~ you and Marti ~ are both moving this month! She's moving closer to me, but you have moved further away! Oh, well! You both are angels and can wing your way to me in the slip of a halo!


Linda

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11 posted 2004-06-17 12:37 PM


Noah I hadn't realized you'd moved either but, then I am so often away from Passions that it makes sense why I didn't know.  It is wonderful to stop in here and read your poetry and to see you glowing through your beautiful happy poetry.  You seem very happy and quite settled in.  I hope you enjoy your new home and you have a whole new avenue of space to write about.  
Take Care Sweetie,
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink


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12 posted 2004-06-17 12:44 PM


Hello Noah

Your words were so uplifting and vibrant and it pleases me to see you so happy.  Our home is now complete now that you've returned.

Take care..........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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13 posted 2004-06-17 02:03 AM


So you're in Portland then? Such a beautiful area! And the rose parade - amazing! My mom lives in Portland, and I'm not too far away from there... I'm close to Vancouver, WA. It's great to see you back at your poetic home and to see you enjoying your new home  
Excellent poem!

Always, Alyssa

PS Make sure you have an umbrella and a rain jacket!

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
                  Joyce kilmer

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