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vandana
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0 posted 2004-06-11 04:59 PM


Let me be the one for you,
Let me be the one
To love you
Believe me,
Trust me
I will make you believe,
Iam only the one for you,
So let me love you more,
Everyday.
Let me teach you
To love me,
Let me hold you,
In my arms
Make you believe
I will love you,
Dearly,
Take my hand
Make me believe
How much you love me?
Let me be the one for you,
Let me be near,
To be with you,
Let me love you more,
Hold me close to you,
Let me be the one for you


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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-06-11 05:03 PM


Lovely Vandana...much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Susan
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walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-06-11 11:23 PM


I have felt this.  Enjoyed --

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

iliana
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3 posted 2004-06-12 12:33 PM


Enjoyed!  
Kevo
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4 posted 2004-06-12 12:52 PM


Someone would be a lucky person if they weren't so blind.  Very persuasive.  I really liked it.

Kevin

catalinamoon
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5 posted 2004-06-12 04:44 PM


Oh I do know this feeling. I could sing it in my sleep. Beautifully said.
Sandra

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2004-06-15 03:29 AM


Lovely...James
Soleil Noir
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7 posted 2004-06-15 09:54 AM



Vandana, you continue to show your growth.
Well done, dear.

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2004-06-15 09:57 AM


~ how could he resist???

Hi, vandana! So good to read you again! Hope all is well!

Big hug!
EA


JL
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9 posted 2004-06-15 01:52 PM


Beautiful!!!

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


Ericc
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10 posted 2004-06-15 04:26 PM


A beautiful invitation from a
beautiful heart.

Eric

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