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Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
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0 posted 2004-06-11 03:43 PM



Secret Love

I see your words upon the page
They seem so warm today
You talk of love and the beauty around you
I fall in love each time I read
I ponder could these words be for me?
Your words massage my aching head
They wrap around me in warmth like a soft velvet
blanket
A tear trembles on the brink of falling
Knowing within my heart that these words are not for
me.
You do not know I exist
I am a stranger in the realm of poetic beauty
Another day has come to pass
Your words flow across the page barely brushing my
awaiting fingertips.
I close my eyes and wonder once again
Could this beauty be for me?
I wonder?

Love BonBon

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1 posted 2004-06-11 05:20 PM


OhBonnie~
This is such a poignant read~
I simply adore the way you word-pour the page~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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JamesMichael
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2 posted 2004-06-13 01:52 AM


Nice writing...reminds me of that old song..."Once I had a secret love."  James
iliana
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3 posted 2004-06-13 01:55 AM


BonBon -- many secret loves are written in poetry.....I hope some of them are for you.   ...jo
Kevo
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Navarro County, Texas, USA
4 posted 2004-06-13 02:12 AM


Kind of the secret admirer theme.  It is a such a heartfelt creation.  Passionate, patient, yet wanting, the patient seems to have an underlying message of urgency.  It is beautifully composed and I hope the person notices at some point.  What a flattering thing for the author.  I really enjoyed the invite into this post.

Sincerely,

Kevin

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5 posted 2004-06-17 12:55 PM


perhaps
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