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LeeJ
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0 posted 2004-06-11 10:26 AM


Tattooed mirage floating
Delicate patterns
On smooth skin of mind
3rd eye perceives from the other side
Unfinished redesigns
Nowhere to be seen yet experienced
Upgrading miracle workers
Like a long interpreted woven muslin
Recording every seduction
Flowing like incense, this Jesus
Sweet platelets effervescent
Pulses of sound facing white curtains
I cry tears of joy
Flaring gestures in another space
Silent space with determined arms
Never rejecting, always accepting
What is self-assured and sacred firewood
Perception floating in the loins of survivors
Where knowledge ripens
Taking us unto a tenderness pure
Where our harmony is synchronized
Right into the center of the light of his smile
Writing each of our pages
Within the blush of sky
Inviting us, for all time
not just when we need him

© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2004-06-11 11:50 AM


Lee, I was incredibly moved by this divine poem of wonder! You have such a unique style of writing and your words are so rich in meaning and images!

Love & Light,
Linda

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2 posted 2004-06-11 12:46 PM


This is absolutely beautiful
passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-06-15 12:22 PM


oh yes!
JL
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4 posted 2004-06-15 01:46 PM


I must agree with all the above!  Great write Lee J.

JL


She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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